Hi Anaiyah, I read your poem quite a few times to understand the emotion behind your chosen comparisons. I was thinking, out of all the nouns you chose - the sun prevails over the whale and the bright red rose. In other words, Windsor is the greatest house in the school? What are your thoughts? Was that your train of thought?
Great Poem Anaiyah. Where did you get the ideas from?
ReplyDeleteHi Anaiyah,
ReplyDeleteI read your poem quite a few times to understand the emotion behind your chosen comparisons. I was thinking, out of all the nouns you chose - the sun prevails over the whale and the bright red rose. In other words, Windsor is the greatest house in the school? What are your thoughts? Was that your train of thought?